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This is the one where I use waaaaaay too many quotes (in this case, from Chapter 12). I did my best to skip over long bits of conversation (ms_nawilla, the author of ATLL, has the same tendency I do to have super long-ass Heinlein-esque conversations that are most of the plot.) I didn't want to cover every single beat because for many of them, there isn't much I can add via Ara, so I have her tune out or go wash dishes or something.

I spent two weeks or so going over the various versions of Ara at the vigil, and now, while I still want to stay with Ara in the prequel-verse, and I like original characters like Masters Si and Bes and Jitters and Kressa, aside from the stuff I'll be re-writing for the updated timeline, I'm going to be moving to scenarios that take place at different events (some will be at the same place, like there are scenarios that take place on the South Terrace at tea, and at least one idea for a future Light Nights, and an Aldera Summit where Obi-Wan, Yoda, and Ara are the Jedi attendees). The story is great, but I feel like a weirdo being so canon-specific for a fanfiction, even a fairly epic 'verse like this one. Vigil stuff incoming (this first part is gonna be looooong); after that, more on the updated timeline, then, slowly, more bits of story may or may not ever become something I can post to AO3.

(They said, as if anyone else was reading this.)

Author's Note: Stelara House is something from my Sequel Trilogy daydream, the Elia Garek 'verse. They make custom leather BDSM paraphernalia (like whips and floggers), and they have an optional coating that makes it so that the item can be completely sterilized in a high-pitched sonic shower. (As opposed to real leather, which can absorb fluids and get gross, those details are irrelevant to anything in this post because while there are a few mentions of kink, but nothing that's particularly NSFW.)

Day 3 of the vigil, enter Bail and Rouge )

This next part is an alternate version of what happens directly after Yoda, Quinlan, and Kressa ask Ara how to talk to Obi-Wan about the near-SA in this part of the previous entry. I thought Ara offering to help Eller in her regular work during this time could be one of the things that leads to Ara becoming Eller's assistant.

Relevant context for this scene:The Library Kidnapping (TLK); Master Nu suggesting Ara be Eller's assistant. Timeline changes will mostly affect how old Ara was for TLK and LNF's arrival in Temple.

At the time of The Vigil, Ara is still an Archvist. Her job is sometimes admin work with Master Nu but mostly either helping people use the Archives or taking reference calls from field knights (the latter being what Qui-Gon Jinn kept calling Tahl on her personal line for throughout the Jedi Apprentice series). LNF's creche group (which includes Anakin) is old enough to use the Archives. [Not sure how LNF finds out that he and Ara are gentically related--either he sees her name on his paperwork when he's in the Halls of Healing, or maybe he just goes to the Archives with his creche group, Ara looks at him but sees the worst of the Bad Men from TLK, can't hide the horror in her face or her Force presence, and runs to the 'fresher to be sick, then she has to explain herself.] Either way, LNF's friend Anakin's friend Chancellor Palpatine will convince both of them that LNF "deserves" a relationhip with "his mother" and refuse to leave her alone, which makes the trauma reactions, loss of appetite, nightmares, etc., go from bad to worse to the point where it's affecting her work.

And...wow, I think I put more thought into this summary than the actual snippet. Oh well, it's my DW.

an offer of help )

This next part takes place early on Day 2 of The Vigil. I'm lonely and touch-starved, so myself-insert OC gets TWO CUDDLES. The conversation after "Oh, bite me" is ridiculosity that will never make it to the AO3 version of this 'verse but it was fun to imagine.

more action than these quarters have seen since the previous occupant )

Edit: Just remembered there was an earlier version of trying to find a way for Ara and Yoda to cuddle on Obi-Wan's couch during The Vigil. This takes place overnight between Days 1 and 2:

self-indulgent ridiculosity )

Edit, 03/30/24: I started to correct the tenses here, then I remembered that I started to re-write this entire piece to reflect the still-changing (but not as drastically as before) timeline and to try to quote the source fic less. So...sorry the tenses in especially the first part are so wonky.
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The Vigil takes place during chapters nine, ten, eleven, twelve, and thirteen (CW for remembered attempted rape in Ch.13) of All The Little Lights. My stories in that universe are an AU of an AU, and I guess I have to keep reminding myself of that, because I kept going back to try to keep to the 'canon' of the 'source material' fic, but towards the end of writing all this out, I decided fuck it and decided to just write out whatever I daydreamed and could actually make into a semi-coherent conversation. (There are also two scenes where I try to give my self-insert OC an in-universe-realistic reason to cuddle Yoda, and both wind up ridiculous, but dammit, I want to cuddle Yoda.)

This first part contains several direct or slightly altered quotes from Chapter 9. But not as many as when I dropped Ara into Chapter 12. On the bright side, I'm starting to burn out on keeping to the story itself and instead being more interested in the world and the characters, and also bringing in worldbuilding and characters from other fics. Though that last part won't be in this (very long) entry.

P.S. This takes place in the new timeline (still working out the details), where Ara is two years older than Obi-Wan. (She and Quinlan might be the same age to the day, but I haven't decided yet.)

a bit of Chapter 9, then new stuff )

Here are some bits that were going to be part of the above, but they didn't fit: they were Ara oversharing about Obi-Wan or just stuff that wasn't relevant.

outtakes )

Day 2 of the Vigil

(I daydreamed this all the way to Sarasota and back as Master Gi-Ho showing up while Bail and Rouge were there, but he was there on day 2, not day 3. This doesn't happen, but I'm going to write it out in case any of the dialogue is useful later.)

[This contains dialogue from the end of Chapter 11, and the beginning of the relevant section says that this part takes place after dinner hour, but Bail and Rouge's visit was morning and afternoon, so I'm putting this at early afternoon.]

Master Gi-Ho has magic hands )

2/5/24:Dammit, that's the bedtime alarm. I'll post the rest tomorrow.